Look Down!

Once there were two young boys. They were excited because they were going to Australia. They had been running around fast like cheetahs that day. They went with their whole family so the whole family was excited about it. They hopped on the plane and took off.

When their parents were asleep the boys were wondering what it looked like outside. They were looking around to find their way out. When they got out of the plane they were looking for a spot to sit. They found a place to sit and it was on one of the wings of the plane.

Then one of the boys pointed down and said “look how high we are!’’. The other boy was shocked when he saw how high they were. Then the parents woke up and saw that their kids were not there so they looked around and they couldn't find them.

Luckily the pilot in the plane saw the boys sitting outside of the plane so he went running to the parents and told them that their children were outside of the plane. The parents were freaked out when he told them that. They ran and carefully opened the door and the boys were sitting on a wing.

Then the parents said “you are in very big trouble” so the boys were sad and walked back inside the plane. One hour later they reached Australia and the boys had to stay in a room for the day and the parents got to relax for the day too. Then they flew back to NZ to live their life.

Here is my narrative. Can you tell what the problem and solution are?